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Wow, awesome idea, a really creative premise overall!
The animation was solid and the concept was an amazing feat of art, I must say.
If only I hadn't been so stupid to buy a crappy "regular" DS, I could be enjoying the splendors of the Paper DS tenfold!
Again though, loved the idea, great job!
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I my opinion, it was well animated, true to the song, I just felt the style didn't quite match the speed of the song.
It wasn't slow technically, but I think it would flow a little better if the animation was more frantic, especially during the part where he lists what's in the store.
But I'll admit, synching song and visual together is really tough, and Hardware Store is an especially hard song to synch. Props goes to you for taking on such a challenge.
Anyways, good job!
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I really liked it, especially when the brown-hairded, bearded gentlemen told the stories. Plus the conversations alone were pretty good. I mean I had a good lugh anyways.
Try not to take this to offense, but I feel like I've seen this too many times before, which isn't necessarily a bad thing if it works for you, it's just maybe it needed a little more depth, or maybe it just needs a sequel, I could be wrong.
All the scenes were pretty good, I just felt the starwars one dragged on a bit, that's all.
The drawings for the charcters were, I felt, really original, and the animation I felt was pretty good.
However, the style its done in, I felt it really resembled a comic strip in the sense of the humor and the content, so kudos for a job well done on that.
This, whether as a series, or comic book, has a lot of potential, I could picture it becoming a web-comic or something of the like (if that's your intention)
Anyways, good job, maybe make another one if you have time!
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there are 5 episodes not including shorts and bloopers check em out
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